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12-13-2006, 07:49 PM
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Capo
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Audio: The Thought Process
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4772770
Basically exactly what it says...this is a concept song me and my boy Hope worked on awhile back...beat is by this cat Enigma....pretty dope.. More the backpack style..but enjoy..and use open ears and listen to some of the shit we talk about...
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12-13-2006, 08:42 PM
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I'm feeling this joint. Voice is so so, but you use it to your advantage by spitting harder and using more presence. Delivery is on point, flow is riding nice. Lyrics are pretty good, on the backpacker shit like you said so a lot of the lyrics will go over peoples heads but I'm liking it. I like the multis your flippin. You got a nice style for sure. Beat is serious, good choice for you voice also. Chorus is on point, sounds different then your normal voice a lil bit but I like it. Keep doing your thing. Check out one of my joints and return the love.
Either the Me and U Remix or Just Can't Understand....Probably Just Can't Understand would better for you tastes... |
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12-14-2006, 07:58 AM
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Capo
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The rhymin does fit the beat at all.
This is for more mellow shit. that killed it for you. Beat is old as hell but still dope. later on it gets better. The lyrics are weak and rhyme scheme bores me. You all have the potential to drop something Dope, just not in this track, not now. keep at it. |
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12-14-2006, 01:03 PM
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Capo
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Amish you misunderstood the reasoning behind this track...it was meant to be more mellow than an actual 'grimy' track..hence the reason I told you it was more for the backpackers....
Obviously you're entitled to your opinion..but the reason we made this was to juss talk about what its like bein' a strugglin underground artist...peep the rest of my music on the page...and you can see the transition of our music... But whatever the case..we're good enough to have gotten recognition to open up for Jurassic 5 and Method Man...
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12-14-2006, 01:20 PM
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Ok nice beat..
nice flow..some of the delivery needs to be tighter..nice emotion and swagger..hooks nice..sounds old skool..quality's cool..loving that sample man..wouldn't hurt to be louder lol....mellow shit man..liking it..but dont label your self as a backpacker..be diverse..i personally various styles of hip hop..i hate being labeled...overall this was nice man..some delivery issues, but most of it was water son. Peace
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12-14-2006, 02:47 PM
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Capo
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Thanks for the feed Jonesy....I appreciate it...
And Revelation..I'll get to those tracks of yours when Im outta class and outta work tonight...
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12-15-2006, 10:05 AM
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Beat is nyce...But IMO it dont match tha mood of this joint...You need a more smoother, cypher type beat...I'm feelin tha hook and for tha most part tha flow is pretty good...Nice lyrics...
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