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Illustration · 12-15-2006, 01:20 PM

Well..these are both songs I just did to more or less vent about certain situations...

Freak These Hoes - A joint I did after I first heard Murs 3:16...gave me inspiration to just vent about the stupid chicks I see around my area..and the typical ones you'd expect to fit the 'stereotypes'...had to switch up for a more mellow flow on this one...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4688693

On The Grind - Another song I juss recently recorded..I was stressin' big time while studying for a midterm..so I juss grabbed the pen n juss wrote about my current situation...again a more somber joint..so enjoy..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4730456

†SaW† · 12-15-2006, 02:05 PM

Hmm

1st song: i like the beat....very classical somewhat ino. Your flow was ok, but at some points i felt there was alittle inconsistency. Still your concepts was very logical and thoughout toward the topic.

2nd Song: Another nice beat, and this time your consistency was very on point and good actually. Good storyline of what you was trying to get through of flowing and kept your pace within the beat. Good song man.

DreamUnit36 · 12-15-2006, 04:41 PM

1st song: Beat is nice, old school type beat, very mellow, lyrics are alright didn't really hear any big punches or any real lines that stood out. Concept is nice tho, girl do be spendin' way too damn much at the mall and shit.

2nd Song: Beat is nice again, also sounds like an old school type beat. Flow is pretty nice, Concepts are on point again (you're really good wit those) lyrics were a lil' better in this one, but overall it aint bad.

Overall: Good job on both tracks concepts is mos def your thang just keep it up. --45--Ez--

check out some of my stuff at www.soundclick.com/kontroversy45 "I Bring That Pain" and "So Many Tears" are my new ones, return the fav. thanks!

**G-Rated** · 12-15-2006, 06:47 PM

"Freak These Hoes"....Beat is straight, but some of the vocals sound a bit drowned/muffled...Lyrics are a bit predictable & basic, with a few stand out lines...Flow is sketchy, some parts you ride it well, others you fall off a bit...Hook needs to be a bit more catchy to grab at tha listener...But overall its a pretty nyce drop....

"On The Grind"...Real nice beat...Lyrics create a vivid storyline about tha skool shit...Good flow...I liked this was more than the other...Solid drop.

Keep doin ya thang...

12-15-2006, 01:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
Illustration Capo Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 834	2 Audios: Freak These Hoes and On The Grind.. Well..these are both songs I just did to more or less vent about certain situations... Freak These Hoes - A joint I did after I first heard Murs 3:16...gave me inspiration to just vent about the stupid chicks I see around my area..and the typical ones you'd expect to fit the 'stereotypes'...had to switch up for a more mellow flow on this one... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4688693 On The Grind - Another song I juss recently recorded..I was stressin' big time while studying for a midterm..so I juss grabbed the pen n juss wrote about my current situation...again a more somber joint..so enjoy.. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4730456 __________________ I know lowlifes that are livin the high life At great heights I exercise my rights So much smoke, when I'm this high, I sky-write - Iriscience

12-15-2006, 02:05 PM	#2 (permalink)
†SaW† Capo Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Woodland Ave.....Body Count Posts: 887	Hmm 1st song: i like the beat....very classical somewhat ino. Your flow was ok, but at some points i felt there was alittle inconsistency. Still your concepts was very logical and thoughout toward the topic. 2nd Song: Another nice beat, and this time your consistency was very on point and good actually. Good storyline of what you was trying to get through of flowing and kept your pace within the beat. Good song man. __________________ Abstract-is-Creativity..

12-15-2006, 06:47 PM	#4 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,721	"Freak These Hoes"....Beat is straight, but some of the vocals sound a bit drowned/muffled...Lyrics are a bit predictable & basic, with a few stand out lines...Flow is sketchy, some parts you ride it well, others you fall off a bit...Hook needs to be a bit more catchy to grab at tha listener...But overall its a pretty nyce drop.... "On The Grind"...Real nice beat...Lyrics create a vivid storyline about tha skool shit...Good flow...I liked this was more than the other...Solid drop. Keep doin ya thang... __________________ Back To My Roots.

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12-15-2006, 04:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
DreamUnit36 Rookie Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 27	1st song: Beat is nice, old school type beat, very mellow, lyrics are alright didn't really hear any big punches or any real lines that stood out. Concept is nice tho, girl do be spendin' way too damn much at the mall and shit. 2nd Song: Beat is nice again, also sounds like an old school type beat. Flow is pretty nice, Concepts are on point again (you're really good wit those) lyrics were a lil' better in this one, but overall it aint bad. Overall: Good job on both tracks concepts is mos def your thang just keep it up. --45--Ez-- check out some of my stuff at www.soundclick.com/kontroversy45 "I Bring That Pain" and "So Many Tears" are my new ones, return the fav. thanks!