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Wreck · 03-25-2007, 11:56 AM

new freestyle, its to jadakiss's checkmate beat, but i named the freestyle, the open arms freestyle

heres the link for yall:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/wreck-ch...style-mp3.html

AND REMEMBER, CONDUCTIVE CRITISM, NO FUCKING SHIT TALKING, have some respect, i aint the best but im gettin better considering i only started about a month ago roughly

King Of New York · 03-25-2007, 12:50 PM

sounds good for a white dude, it was pretty clear, some shit wuznt clear but besides that, good shiet 1
1
1!!

Wreck · 03-25-2007, 02:45 PM

feedback please

Pathogenik · 03-25-2007, 08:05 PM

good choice of beat I'm working on a song with that beat right now. The only thing is sometimes you sound like you're just reading your lines. You gotta feel it more ya know what I mean? Also you should save up and get a better mic. But other than not that bad. I'm just starting out as well.

23rd Prophecy · 03-25-2007, 09:21 PM

ehh.i dont like it

elijah0426 · 03-26-2007, 01:11 PM

bro are you serious im not tryin to knock you but bro you have to slow down you are off track like a muthafucker please i hope this is a joke

young pun · 03-27-2007, 09:26 PM

Yo B You Gotta Flow Wit The Beat I Cant Really Say Shit Cuz I Aint Put Nothin Up There Cuz I Dont Know But Try To Flow Wit It And Slow Down A Lil

shibbydude1018 · 03-31-2007, 07:41 PM

i was hoping this would be more like creeds version of open arms HAHA

Wreck · 03-31-2007, 08:08 PM

dude u a faggot, are u recordin shit? NO

03-25-2007, 11:56 AM	#1 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	new freestyle "open arms" / checkmate freestyle new freestyle, its to jadakiss's checkmate beat, but i named the freestyle, the open arms freestyle heres the link for yall: http://www.zshare.net/audio/wreck-ch...style-mp3.html AND REMEMBER, CONDUCTIVE CRITISM, NO FUCKING SHIT TALKING, have some respect, i aint the best but im gettin better considering i only started about a month ago roughly

03-25-2007, 08:05 PM	#4 (permalink)
Pathogenik Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Ohio Posts: 5,283	good choice of beat I'm working on a song with that beat right now. The only thing is sometimes you sound like you're just reading your lines. You gotta feel it more ya know what I mean? Also you should save up and get a better mic. But other than not that bad. I'm just starting out as well. __________________ "The only good is knowledge and the only evil is ignorance." - Socrates

03-27-2007, 09:26 PM	#7 (permalink)
young pun Underboss Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: STRAIGHT OUTTA BADLANDS Posts: 1,035	Yo B You Gotta Flow Wit The Beat I Cant Really Say Shit Cuz I Aint Put Nothin Up There Cuz I Dont Know But Try To Flow Wit It And Slow Down A Lil __________________ BORICUA

03-31-2007, 07:41 PM	#8 (permalink)
shibbydude1018 Criminal Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 98	i was hoping this would be more like creeds version of open arms HAHA __________________

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03-25-2007, 12:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
King Of New York Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: New York New York, Big City Of Dreams Posts: 1,640	sounds good for a white dude, it was pretty clear, some shit wuznt clear but besides that, good shiet 1 1 1!!

03-25-2007, 02:45 PM	#3 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	feedback please

03-25-2007, 09:21 PM	#5 (permalink)
23rd Prophecy Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 308	ehh.i dont like it

03-26-2007, 01:11 PM	#6 (permalink)
elijah0426 Gangster Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 302	bro are you serious im not tryin to knock you but bro you have to slow down you are off track like a muthafucker please i hope this is a joke

03-31-2007, 08:08 PM	#9 (permalink)
Wreck Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: jerseyyyyyy, 11-10 Battle Record Posts: 7,508	dude u a faggot, are u recordin shit? NO