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JDaKidd · 03-25-2007, 08:22 PM

We back again, but this will not be on Tears of a Slave, it will be on a different mixtape. On this one, I try to do like ya'll say and pop my collar and act as if I wanted to and all. And as of my sis, she just turn 11 in December so she not the best out, but she damn hot to say she 11, but tell me what you think of this.

King Kong
http://www.zshare.net/audio/king-kong-mp3-sha.html

Classik · 03-26-2007, 08:29 AM

feed?

Prycele$$ · 03-26-2007, 10:33 AM

liked last line of first verse..
Chorus is hot (hahah)
lyrics are pretty good.. work on breath control
you said 'i spit lyrical bullets like gr--' and i dont even know the rest of the words..
change your flow up.. and on second verse.. u talkin on the verse..
work on deilvery and flow..
dont start 'durin the chorus' on sampled beats.. ya know wat i mean? also turn ya voice down a lil.. thats a good help wit flow.. and do you record wit headphones?

anyway.. song was pretty nice..
it was 'cute'(i said it) you put your lil sis on the track hahah.. she aint half bad either..
keep it up..

JDaKidd · 03-26-2007, 04:30 PM

lol, thanks for the feed.

rahuLL · 03-26-2007, 05:33 PM

lady t>>>>

JDaKidd · 03-26-2007, 08:20 PM

ok rahull, if she is better than me, I would be glad cuz I see what I help crate but that dont matter. Thanks tho.

Grimy · 03-27-2007, 04:13 AM

Damn..That was sick...Lyrics were good, flow was good, I loved the "they musta diconnect you cos you can't get a hot line" line. I think it was pretty ill actually.

Kunnin' · 03-27-2007, 04:21 AM

First verse actually had some nice lyrics, might need to add some more words to up the syllable count cause it seemed slow.

Second verse was slow, the voice was rather annoying and reminded me of another rapper which I can't name.

Third verse seemed pretty good as well. Syllable count seemed more on point, flowed fairly well also.

First and third verse were actually pretty good, waiting to hear some more shit to see if your voice doesn't overshadow the beat like it did somewhat in this track. Wasn't feeling the voice or the lyrics of the second verse, the whole Spongebob line was bitten. Nice shit though keep at it and when you up some more tracks PM me the link.

JDaKidd · 03-27-2007, 07:41 AM

ok, thanks for the feed

Grimy · 03-27-2007, 01:02 PM

You mind if i put it on my iPod?

03-25-2007, 08:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,404	JDaKidd and Slients187 feat. Lady T(My sister) - King Kong We back again, but this will not be on Tears of a Slave, it will be on a different mixtape. On this one, I try to do like ya'll say and pop my collar and act as if I wanted to and all. And as of my sis, she just turn 11 in December so she not the best out, but she damn hot to say she 11, but tell me what you think of this. King Kong http://www.zshare.net/audio/king-kong-mp3-sha.html

03-26-2007, 08:29 AM	#2 (permalink)
Classik Rap GodFather Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: ..--.:KENTUCKY:.--.. Posts: 6,224	feed? __________________ Back 2 Da ClassiK Style.. www.validusapparel.bigcartel.com BEATS- http://www.myspace.com/classikproductionz

03-26-2007, 10:33 AM	#3 (permalink)
Prycele$$ Don Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Elkhart, dat C.O.E niggas... Posts: 2,746	liked last line of first verse.. Chorus is hot (hahah) lyrics are pretty good.. work on breath control you said 'i spit lyrical bullets like gr--' and i dont even know the rest of the words.. change your flow up.. and on second verse.. u talkin on the verse.. work on deilvery and flow.. dont start 'durin the chorus' on sampled beats.. ya know wat i mean? also turn ya voice down a lil.. thats a good help wit flow.. and do you record wit headphones? anyway.. song was pretty nice.. it was 'cute'(i said it) you put your lil sis on the track hahah.. she aint half bad either.. keep it up.. __________________ Jews In Space > Super Spicey DopeSauce. dumbfuck.

03-27-2007, 04:21 AM	#8 (permalink)
Kunnin' Rap GodFather Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: That Place, With Those People Posts: 14,363	First verse actually had some nice lyrics, might need to add some more words to up the syllable count cause it seemed slow. Second verse was slow, the voice was rather annoying and reminded me of another rapper which I can't name. Third verse seemed pretty good as well. Syllable count seemed more on point, flowed fairly well also. First and third verse were actually pretty good, waiting to hear some more shit to see if your voice doesn't overshadow the beat like it did somewhat in this track. Wasn't feeling the voice or the lyrics of the second verse, the whole Spongebob line was bitten. Nice shit though keep at it and when you up some more tracks PM me the link. __________________ -FREE GRAPE-

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03-26-2007, 04:30 PM	#4 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,404	lol, thanks for the feed.

03-26-2007, 05:33 PM	#5 (permalink)
rahuLL Banned Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: 204 Posts: 20,805	lady t>>>>

03-26-2007, 08:20 PM	#6 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,404	ok rahull, if she is better than me, I would be glad cuz I see what I help crate but that dont matter. Thanks tho.

03-27-2007, 04:13 AM	#7 (permalink)
Grimy Rap GodFather Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Lizzondon Posts: 14,667	Damn..That was sick...Lyrics were good, flow was good, I loved the "they musta diconnect you cos you can't get a hot line" line. I think it was pretty ill actually.

03-27-2007, 07:41 AM	#9 (permalink)
JDaKidd Conartist Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 10,404	ok, thanks for the feed

03-27-2007, 01:02 PM	#10 (permalink)
Grimy Rap GodFather Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Lizzondon Posts: 14,667	You mind if i put it on my iPod?