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maniak · 03-27-2007, 11:01 PM

let me know

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=129921

**G-Rated** · 03-27-2007, 11:55 PM

Its aiite...Sounds like you just freestylin' ...But if you actually sat down n wrote that, I would suggest takin more time on your lyricism...Flow sounded like it was a bit behind tha beat in certain areas...N your vocals need to be turn down just a bit...

Thing is you followed tha same swag as MIMS..I hate that, just kuz you borrow an industry beat dont mean you cant make it yo own by doing a different flow/scheme...Just my opinion tho...

Keep doin what u doin tho...

da mack · 03-28-2007, 12:04 AM

bad tymes that track was hot real talk keep spitting mo ups to ya

thekid · 04-11-2007, 10:42 PM

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Originally Posted by G-Rated

Its aiite...Sounds like you just freestylin' ...But if you actually sat down n wrote that, I would suggest takin more time on your lyricism...Flow sounded like it was a bit behind tha beat in certain areas...N your vocals need to be turn down just a bit...

Thing is you followed tha same swag as MIMS..I hate that, just kuz you borrow an industry beat dont mean you cant make it yo own by doing a different flow/scheme...Just my opinion tho...

Keep doin what u doin tho...

Couldnt have said it better myself. Also, sounds like you sneak recordin...like you dont want no one to hear you? In other words use more emotion. Sounds like a free verse

03-27-2007, 11:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
maniak Underboss Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: where dem byrds be Posts: 1,051	Maniak - this is y i'm hot remix let me know http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=129921

03-28-2007, 12:04 AM	#3 (permalink)
da mack Rookie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 9	giving props bad tymes that track was hot real talk keep spitting mo ups to ya

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03-27-2007, 11:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
G-Rated RGFMod Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: ★☆ Texas ☆★ Posts: 7,721	Its aiite...Sounds like you just freestylin' ...But if you actually sat down n wrote that, I would suggest takin more time on your lyricism...Flow sounded like it was a bit behind tha beat in certain areas...N your vocals need to be turn down just a bit... Thing is you followed tha same swag as MIMS..I hate that, just kuz you borrow an industry beat dont mean you cant make it yo own by doing a different flow/scheme...Just my opinion tho... Keep doin what u doin tho...