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Old 04-04-2007, 04:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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ok i jus wrote this short shit and jus put it on the beat...
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1min 21secs.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/ice-crea...k-rap-mp3.html
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Old 04-04-2007, 08:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 04-05-2007, 12:01 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 04-05-2007, 12:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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you are too fast for the beat at certain points in the song.. You are B and P-ing some shit like it pops.. Meaning your lips are too close to the mic.

Other than that sounds cool.
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Old 04-05-2007, 08:58 PM   #6 (permalink)
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