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Old 04-14-2007, 12:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default The Walls Are Closing In - AUDIO!

Well..this was actually written during the three-way topical between me, Sureloc n G-Rated..and I planned on recording it at some point..so here it is...

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The walls are closing in...perhaps its a new place to hide
To become one with the shadows..see where they reside
They're closed now and you slowly become darkness's slave
In hopes of one day remembering what sealed this place

It started at a young age when you were highly confused
Unaware of the heavy amount of drugs you consumed
When the supply ran low you often left the spot
How to get there?
You just used your trackmarks to connect the dots
Cause wherever there wasn't a hole
Was the exact spot where the needle would go
Tied down by a rubber band..squeezed to feel the pressure
To gain the upper hand then take desperate measures
Youd trip over nothin..act like people would rob you
Popped too many mushrooms you mistook for Gods food
Or was it the mescaline what brought on your downfall?
And whyd you use your nails to carve names on the walls?
Thats all you see when the walls move so slow
When all you wanna do is escape..run n go home
N just for recreation youre better off tryin' to wreck creation
Just another hope to try n escape from isolation
Its a desolute place because the walls are still closin
And your heart that was once strong is suddenly broken
Actually..yours is in tact but youve broken others
You'll need more than superglue to fix this clutter
To clean up this mess..find materials to mold it quick
As you cry a river..build a bridge then get over it
Nows your chance for redemption as theyre closing in
Then suddenly..you see light n spot an openin

And just like that..your back to freedom..yet something is wrong
Why is that angel over there playing a heavenly song?
You glance the room briefly and notice the fallen chair
And notice your high off the ground dangling in mid air
You attempt to fidget around but you cant even move
N notice that your neck is suddenly tied by a noose
Your breath is growin thin and again walls are closing in
Why was this last 10 seconds considered my opening?
A death is imminent and that last bit of light shuts your mouth
Once you see the walls closing in..just know time is runnin out
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Old 04-14-2007, 03:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Man that shit is hot dude, I like this joint a lot. Ima see if its on mp3 so I can put it on my Ipod.
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Old 04-14-2007, 04:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Good joint. It kinda reminded me of Immortal technique's Dance with the devil.

That shit's on a professionals level.
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This was really nice shit.

My only feed would be that it seemed like some lines were a little stretched & that you were rushing them in kind of. It may not have been but that's just what I heard.


Besides that, sick shit man.
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Old 04-19-2007, 04:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Definitely dope topic right here.. Lyrics were on point. I heard about 2 bars total that were rushed a bit.. Other than that shit was on point. Than again any topic is hard to stay on point flow wise, especially if its in depth and you have alot to say.. Filler is necessary to explain situations. Definitely a dope track.

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The hi-fi version isn't working .

You should do a collab with some topical head on that shit. Definitely a nice track, if you've got a link to any of your mixtapes hit me up with the link. I wanna check it out
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/\ Thanks Niq...the feed is DEF appreciated...

And Oblivious...just click on that link and click on the 'music' link on the side..a few of my beats are there..but 95% of my songs are up there..
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hot bro


i wanan collab wit you hit me up wit a PM


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