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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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Well..this was actually written during the three-way topical between me, Sureloc n G-Rated..and I planned on recording it at some point..so here it is...
Enjoy! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5234504 The walls are closing in...perhaps its a new place to hide To become one with the shadows..see where they reside They're closed now and you slowly become darkness's slave In hopes of one day remembering what sealed this place It started at a young age when you were highly confused Unaware of the heavy amount of drugs you consumed When the supply ran low you often left the spot How to get there? You just used your trackmarks to connect the dots Cause wherever there wasn't a hole Was the exact spot where the needle would go Tied down by a rubber band..squeezed to feel the pressure To gain the upper hand then take desperate measures Youd trip over nothin..act like people would rob you Popped too many mushrooms you mistook for Gods food Or was it the mescaline what brought on your downfall? And whyd you use your nails to carve names on the walls? Thats all you see when the walls move so slow When all you wanna do is escape..run n go home N just for recreation youre better off tryin' to wreck creation Just another hope to try n escape from isolation Its a desolute place because the walls are still closin And your heart that was once strong is suddenly broken Actually..yours is in tact but youve broken others You'll need more than superglue to fix this clutter To clean up this mess..find materials to mold it quick As you cry a river..build a bridge then get over it Nows your chance for redemption as theyre closing in Then suddenly..you see light n spot an openin And just like that..your back to freedom..yet something is wrong Why is that angel over there playing a heavenly song? You glance the room briefly and notice the fallen chair And notice your high off the ground dangling in mid air You attempt to fidget around but you cant even move N notice that your neck is suddenly tied by a noose Your breath is growin thin and again walls are closing in Why was this last 10 seconds considered my opening? A death is imminent and that last bit of light shuts your mouth Once you see the walls closing in..just know time is runnin out
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Man that shit is hot dude, I like this joint a lot. Ima see if its on mp3 so I can put it on my Ipod.
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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Good joint. It kinda reminded me of Immortal technique's Dance with the devil.
That shit's on a professionals level.
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This was really nice shit.
My only feed would be that it seemed like some lines were a little stretched & that you were rushing them in kind of. It may not have been but that's just what I heard. Besides that, sick shit man.
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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uppin
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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Definitely dope topic right here.. Lyrics were on point. I heard about 2 bars total that were rushed a bit.. Other than that shit was on point. Than again any topic is hard to stay on point flow wise, especially if its in depth and you have alot to say.. Filler is necessary to explain situations. Definitely a dope track.
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The hi-fi version isn't working
.You should do a collab with some topical head on that shit. Definitely a nice track, if you've got a link to any of your mixtapes hit me up with the link. I wanna check it out
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Capo
Join Date: Nov 2006
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/\ Thanks Niq...the feed is DEF appreciated...
And Oblivious...just click on that link and click on the 'music' link on the side..a few of my beats are there..but 95% of my songs are up there..
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